Post by Hippy Fan on Jan 13, 2008 22:24:01 GMT
The Beatles Rewritten
Summary: As John went to the Art Show, instead of meeting Yoko Ono, he met a woman who hates The Beatles and wants to take over it. Will the Beatles let her take over them or should they send her away?
--The Meeting--
John looked around bored in the Art Show, he liked art but with the ones being shown made him feel like that the artists are actually babies dong a hand-print of them. He only saw one good one,but it was made by someone who he never met and probably would never meet. He sighed, 'I feel like a retard going to a circus at 1 o' clock in the morning.' He thought to himself grimly. Oh how he missed his best friend, Stuart Sutcliffe, sure he wasn't that great of a guitar player but he was good in art.
He could've became famous if it wasn't for the hemorrhage he got. John's eyes were distant, his eyes being hidden as he kept looking on the ground. Many girls were trying to imagine him naked but had to refrain from doing so in front of their boyfriends or parents...mostly their fathers.
He wasn't paying attention on where he was going, neither was that girl that didn't pay attention on where she was going as well. He soon bumped into her making her fall down and land on her butt as John was soon out of his stupor and looked at the girl. "I'm sorry, I should have payed attention on where I was going." he apologized quite embarrassed at what happened. The girl looked up and see the one who bumped into her.
She had dark-brown hair, blue eyes, pale skin, and wore glasses. She wore a blue t-shirt and blue jeans with a black purse. She had an hour-glass body. When she saw the one who bumped into her, she narrowed her blue eyes and smirked. John felt an impending doom creep in his spine.
She soon screamed out in fake agony "Help! This guy is trying to rape me!"
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This is my first fabfiction of The Beatles. I don't know if this is good...maybe because I make Naruto fanfictions instead of The Beatles.But whatever. It's short so don't tell me that, but it will get longer.Tell me how you think of this.
Surprised at the ending line.
I like the story and the suspension.
Makes ya wonder what will happen next.